20000th poster gets a cookie (cookie thread (Part 7)) (Part 9)

[Jaiden]

hi latias

[Jaiden]

i lkie you

[ElizaThePsycho (Willow)]

so true

[Atlas]

evening

[Jaiden]

i saw someone draw ur pfp

[Atlas]

grand
it’s always good to see other people who would kill anyone upon being mildly provoked

[Jaiden]

im a girl

[ElizaThePsycho (Willow)]

women!!!

[Jaiden]

no just girl

[ElizaThePsycho (Willow)]

girl…

[May]

benguinedparbecue

[benguinedparbecue]

slander, i have not learned from your mistakes

[Litten]

I just saw this

[Litten]

[Jaiden]

margin of the strange got its first backer demo. god let this come out before silksong

[Jaiden]

holy peak

[Kelsier]

Any readers that would be able to give feedback for a chapter 1 of a novel thingie?
Really want to get the beginning right before doing anything else

[Jane]

Sure, though I’m not sure how useful my opinion would be. (I know next to nothing about writing myself)

[Kelsier]

Same its the first thing i wrote over 1k words lul

[Kelsier]

Sent it